Dreaming of a Love That Doesn't Exist

I wrote something based on a very detailed dream (probably part of maladaptive daydreaming) I had about this guy I fell for who turned out to not be real when I woke up. I became emotionally attached to this person even though they didn't exist and wanted to keep dreaming of them. it's not finished but how is it. please be honest especially if you find it cringe "It feels so good but hurts so bad To look back on you and I I wake up holding you Your golden brown hair and bright smile reflecting the morning sun Your loud warm sweet laugh giving me life I open my eyes only to see our empty bed, without you in my arms A tear rolls down as I stare at the blurry empty palm of my hand that was supposed to be holding yours Wishing I could go back to sleep and dream of you again You were all I needed The cure to my consuming pain My only safe place My haven I loved you so much, more than anything Sometimes I'd like to think that maybe you're out there somewhere I'd like to think that someday we'll cross paths And continue my unfinished dream"